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Jenthecute Posted 20 years ago
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COULD you take a look at this?
0 Sorry, I didn't know how to put a title for this. 02 br
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00 1) is the original sentence and I rephrased it by dividing it into two sentences(1-1). Could you please, take a look at both sentences and tell me how I could make it better? 02 br
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01 b 01 font 00 1)Use this menu to switch the phone to Offline mode, in which the phone functions requring network connctions are deactivated, you can use non-wireless functions, such as, calendar, games, contacts, and voice recorder on an airplane during flight. 02 br
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00 1-1) Use this menu to deactive functions that require network connections. Offline functions, such as, calendar, games, and voice recorder are still available when this mode is on. 00 02 font 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Thank you in advance!! 05 0 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 from Jen(who dreams of becoming a technical writer!!!!) 02 b 010id 1
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00 1) is the original sentence and I rephrased it by dividing it into two sentences(1-1). Could you please, take a look at both sentences and tell me how I could make it better? 02 br
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01 b 01 font 00 1)Use this menu to switch the phone to Offline mode, in which the phone functions requring network connctions are deactivated, you can use non-wireless functions, such as, calendar, games, contacts, and voice recorder on an airplane during flight. 02 br
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00 1-1) Use this menu to deactive functions that require network connections. Offline functions, such as, calendar, games, and voice recorder are still available when this mode is on. 00 02 font 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Thank you in advance!! 05 0 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 from Jen(who dreams of becoming a technical writer!!!!) 02 b 010id 1
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0 Use the Offline mode to deactivate functions requiring network connections. While the mode is on you can still use non-wirelesss functions, such as calendar, games, contacts and voice recorder. 0-
- 0 Use the Offline mode to deactivate functions requiring network connections.
- While the mode is on you can still use non-wirelesss functions, such as calendar, games, contacts and voice recorder.
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0 Use the Offline mode to deactivate functions requiring network connections. While the mode is on you can still use non-wirelesss functions, such as calendar, games, contacts and voice recorder. This mode happens to be most useful during flights. 02 br
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00 Hope this helps. 02 br
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00 P.S.: Watch your spelling, you have s
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00 Hope this helps. 02 br
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0 Hi Jen the cute! 02 br
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00 Like the name... 02 br
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00 I would also brake the first sentence up and propose the following: 02 br
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00 This menu switches the phone to Offline mode, which deactivate functions that require network connections. Features such as the calendar, games, contacts and the voice recorder, which does not require
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00 Like the name... 02 br
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00 I would also brake the first sentence up and propose the following: 02 br
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00 This menu switches the phone to Offline mode, which deactivate functions that require network connections. Features such as the calendar, games, contacts and the voice recorder, which does not require
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10 Use the Offline mode to deactivate functions requiring network connections. While the mode is on you can still use non-wirelesss functions, such as calendar, games, contacts and voice recorder. This mode happens to be most useful during flights. 12 br
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