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Love_bug Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Could you review this article?

0Hi, Im new to article writing, and not much confident at english writing, since english is not my mother tounge, still i've started a new blog in english.02br
00Could you please review this new post that i've just started and tell me few gramatical mistakes and what can i do to imporove my writing gramatically...or may be how long can it take me to improve my writing (looking at all my english writing).. if I set my mind on it. 02br
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0Welcome to the forums, love_bug.02br
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00You'll get a better response if you post directly in the forums, rather than a link to another site.0-
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0Thank you for reply greek, I just want to know how my writings are on that blog, and how do i appeal to reader.. i don't want you to read whole site..also i don't want to annoy you by posting whole articles here. just want to know how i write by you looking at few phrases on that site...! thanks. 0-
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1b00Building page rank02b00 is a gradual process, you can not think of getting page rank overnight, it takes lots of patience and dedication, the most common way to build PR (Page rank) is to get a simple text link from another site.02br
00My first observation: You need to use PERIODS (or full stops, as you prefer) and not join sentence after sentence after sentenc
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0Thanks a lot sir, well that means i don't really have to worry much about grammer? i can now relax and improve on my next blog post. 02br
00thanks for having me here! see you . 0-
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0 01font00Thanks a lot 01del00sir02del00 01font00(GG is a lady!)02font00, well that means 01font00I02font00 01del00i02del00 don't really have to worry much about 01font00grammar 02font
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0Thanks Opti.02br
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00love_bug, your flaws with commas are serious grammatical flaws. I'm not sure how you read what I wrote and thought you had no problems. 0-
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0 Hi thanks for replying, that article is not the first one I wrote, I used to write lots of english article in my early years, dispite english being my second language. Well I do use lots of commas and less periods. I can not determine how short the pause should be inbtween periods or commas. Also i can not determine the use of "on" and "at" i really get confused, another is "people" meaning go
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0A lot of people get confused about prepositions, so don't worry so much about that.02br
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00People is more than one person. Unless you are an anthropologist, don't worry about using "peoples."02br
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00You 01b00do02b00 need to learn how to use the period correctly. It ends a complete sentence. Use a comma to join two complete s
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0 Thank you for replaying, and sorry for delay. Yeah, I think I've improved a lot since my first post. Now I'm using more periods and trying to break paragraphs often. Thank you so much for guidelines. If you guys are generous enough, I'd welcome if you can still sometimes drop by my blog and correct my English writing here in this thread. I want to polish it really hard. Thanks again. 0-

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