Could you review my Ielts task 1

The graph compares five different cities in Australia in terms of proportion of people who was consuming and purchasing tea and coffee in last four weeks. It is clear that the coffee consumption in Australia is common, expect in Adelaide and the percentage of people buying fresh coffee was always higher than all types of coffee.

The first line is bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. In Sydney has 44.5 percent of city resident and the same amount as Melbourne. Brisbane and Adelaide have a nearly same amount, 34 percent and 34.5 percent. On the other hand, Hobart has 37 percent.

The second option, the proportion of instant coffee the highest member is 57 percent in Hobart. Other two cities that have almost the same member are Adelaide is 50 percent and Melbourne is 47 percent. Brisbane have fewer coffee consumption than Hobart is 55 percent. The lest member is 46 percent of Sydney.

The last option of Survey show the percentage of city resident that went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks that is most popular. In Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart are over 60 percent with 6.5 percent, 67 percent and 65 percent respectively. In Brisbane went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks is 55 percent. The lowest is Adelaide that show 49.9 percent of city resident.

In conclusion, the highest percentage of city resident that went to a cafe for coffee and tea in Australia.