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Haha1 Posted 14 years ago
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Enormous earthquake happened in Japan about 2 years ago. The news was(were?) transmitted all over the world, and we could realize severity of nuclear power plants even though we did not directly get damaged. In this way, recognition of different countries’ incidents is very important for us.
  

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haha1 Enormous earthquake happened in Japan about 2 years ago. ) transmitted all over the world, and we could realize severity of nuclear power plants even though we did not directly get damaged. In this way, recognition of different countries’ incidents is very important for us.

— CalifJim

  • haha1 Enormous earthquake happened in Japan about 2 years ago.
  • ) transmitted all over the world, and we could realize severity of nuclear power plants even though we did not directly get damaged.
  • In this way, recognition of different countries’ incidents is very important for us.
  • An enormous earthquake struck Japan about two years ago which damaged several nuclear power plants.
  • When the news of it was transmitted all over the world, we became aware of the perils of nuclear energy even though we did not get damaged directly.
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haha1Enormous earthquake happened in Japan about 2 years ago. The news was(were?) transmitted all over the world, and we could realize severity of nuclear power plants even though we did not directly get damaged. In this way, recognition of different countries’ incidents is very important for us.
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