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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries".
I fully agree with this opinion that universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports as they give to their universities libraries. I think, allocating money for students' sports is an investment because physical activities will help students having healthy body and mind. Moreover, psychological researches indicate that physical activities will improve self confidence. Nowadays most people know that sports have an important role in good health. We know that all types of sports such as swimming, soccer, basketball, gymnastics, etc. can increase muscles' strength and regulate heartbeat and will improve physical robustness. It is obvious that a healthy body can cope well with the many diseases, therefore doing sports can decrease the chance of being infected with different pathogens. What's more, sports (physical activities) will affect the mental health. when people do sports, secretion of some hormones such as endorphin increases. In fact, after doing sports endorphin releases into the blood stream. Researches signify that endorphin can relieve pain, enhance sense of happiness and even can be a remedy for depression. Physical activities can also improve self confidence. Sports help us believe in ourselves. With regular physical activities we can take the stress away, and we can also have a stronger spirit; therefore we can study with more concentration and we will have more productivity too. students with high levels of self confidence, and with physical and mental healthiness can definitely study with more attention, consequently they will have more productivity; thus, I think, universities should earmark the same amount of money to student's sports as they give to university libraries.
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