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Nicetomeetyou Posted 7 years ago
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If I were given one billion yen, I would like to establish a company which produces and

sells healthy precooked foods in my country. This is because at present, there are many people

who try to be health-conscious but cannot maintain a well-balanced diet. This is especially

true of children with working parents. Many of them usually work late, which makes it difficult

for them to cook for their children every day. As a result, they have no other choice but to

depend on instant foods, which usually contain high calories and additives. I believe my company

could serve the needs of these parents and help provide children with healthier and safer meals.

This would not only bring profits to my company but also bring great health benefits to many families.

  
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