could you proofread this...?

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00The following is a writing about a children's play.02br
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00It seems to be a little bit long and I hope somebody to proofread it.02br
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00Would you just take a look at it and comment some?02br
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00Thanks a lot~02br
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01b00The writing is:02b02br
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01b00‘Home alone’ made by a brothers02b02br
01b02b00This play is the story of a brothers who are elementary school students. They couldn’t do anything without their mother, but for a few days when their mom’s away from home, they grow up to cook hot sauce rice cake.02br
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01b00The songs represent children’s plain mind – Sing together !02b02br
01b02b00The actors have played 00<Green Line> 00which is the play of “Ha-hon”. And Jae-ri Jong, who is called ‘genius musician’, participates in the musical performance. He is a percussion instrument player, and phonograph record producer. He arranged the music of this play. He also plays guitar and piano in the play.01b02b00The Songs like <Don’t do anything>, <I can do anything>, <I dislike cleaning>, <I can do>, have easy melody, and express the children’s mind candidly. The scene when the actors and children sing together serves as an opportunity for the audience to participate in the play. The various musical instruments play an amusing sound effect as well as melody.02br
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01b00synopsis 02b00A ten-year-old boy Bi-yong and a kindergartener Bi-ho is a brothers. Their mother cares everything from A to Z about them. For this reason No-ri, one of Bi-yong’s friends, think that’s ridiculous. Suddenly the mother goes into hospital, and the mother’s sister is not coming, the brother is to be just alone at home. First, they’re happy to feel free but before long, they feel hungry and they are scared at the night without the parents. It is not easy at the first time that having meals, going to school, cleaning home, but later, the brothers are to be good at those things and they realize that they can do something by themselves. And then they prepare some surprising present for their mother….02br
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