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İREM CEYHAN Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you proofread the text please?
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I have to make a lesson plan. It''s about 'Jobs' but the context should be written with Present Perfect Tense. So I wrote the reading text myself by using the Present Perfect Tense. Could you please proofread the following text? Thank you in advance.
Today I am very excited because I have a job interview today.I have written my CV and my fiancee has read it for me.The weather has been sunny for three days.This morning I step out of the hoyuse it has satrted to rain. Ph No! I said I have satarted to run to the bus station. I was in a hurry.I haven't noticed the car coming over me and it crashed me. My CV is all wet..The boy has got off the car and has tried to take me to the hospital.I haven't felt so bad before. I don't wat to go to hospital because i can be late for my interview.We have a fight severely with that boy who I haven't seen before. I calla my friend to print me a new CV and bring it to a hospital.I take a taxi to go to the job interview.I am 2 hours late.I go to the company for the job intyerview and I can't believe that boy is infront of me as a general manager of the company!
I have to make a lesson plan. It''s about 'Jobs' but the context should be written with Present Perfect Tense. So I wrote the reading text myself by using the Present Perfect Tense. Could you please proofread the following text? Thank you in advance.
Today I am very excited because I have a job interview today.I have written my CV and my fiancee has read it for me.The weather has been sunny for three days.This morning I step out of the hoyuse it has satrted to rain. Ph No! I said I have satarted to run to the bus station. I was in a hurry.I haven't noticed the car coming over me and it crashed me. My CV is all wet..The boy has got off the car and has tried to take me to the hospital.I haven't felt so bad before. I don't wat to go to hospital because i can be late for my interview.We have a fight severely with that boy who I haven't seen before. I calla my friend to print me a new CV and bring it to a hospital.I take a taxi to go to the job interview.I am 2 hours late.I go to the company for the job intyerview and I can't believe that boy is infront of me as a general manager of the company!
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Hello, IREM CEYHAN—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Leave a space after full stops and other punctuation.
- Hello, IREM CEYHAN—and welcome to English Forums.
- Thank you for registering as a member.
- Leave a space after full stops and other punctuation.
- Present perfect is wrong in most instances.
- Today I am very excited because I have a job interview.
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Hello, IREM CEYHAN—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
Leave a space after full stops and other punctuation. Present perfect is wrong in most instances.
Today I am very excited because I have a job interview. I have written my CV and my fiancee has checked it for me. The weather has been sunny for three days.This morning
Leave a space after full stops and other punctuation. Present perfect is wrong in most instances.
Today I am very excited because I have a job interview. I have written my CV and my fiancee has checked it for me. The weather has been sunny for three days.This morning
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Could you please write one more paragraph by using present perfect tense because i need a longer text.
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IREM CEYHANCould you please write one more paragraph by using present perfect tense because i need a longer text.No, we don't do your work for you here. We just check what you have written. I think you will find it difficult to write a narrative with much present perfect, though. That verb form does not lend itself to story-telling.
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