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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Could you possibly help me with my choice of words?

  • • It is acceptable to use ‘array’ and ‘contains’ in the following sentence, isn’t it? That array of opinions on graft and corruption contains nothing but clichés on political rivalry.
  • • It would be better if I omitted ‘all over social media’ and ‘particularly the Prime Minister’ in this statement, wouldn’t it? Netizens got furious all over social media, putting the blame on the government, particularly the Prime Minister.
  • • ‘Busy with’ is correctly used in the following sentence,’ isn’t it? He is busy with the movement against human trafficking.  
  

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Yes, to all your questions. I don't know why you would want to omit the phrases you mention in the second example. You could word "all over social media," but it could be a good piece of information for the sentence.

  • Yes, to all your questions.
  • I don't know why you would want to omit the phrases you mention in the second example.
  • You could word "all over social media," but it could be a good piece of information for the sentence.
  • Additionally, you might want to mention the Prime Minister.
  • I don't know why you wouldn't.
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Yes, to all your questions. I don't know why you would want to omit the phrases you mention in the second example. You could word "all over social media," but it could be a good piece of information for the sentence. Additionally, you might want to mention the Prime Minister. I don't know why you wouldn't. The sentence would be good without the two phrases, but I don't know why you want to omit th

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