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Chaw Su Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

could you pls correct my english!

0Dear all!02br
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00i'm working at library . i'm writing mail to member who reserve the book to collect the book.. could you pls check my english writing? or do you have any idea for writing better than this.02br
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00dear.........,02br
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00The book you've reserved is availible now..so please come and collect the book till 25/1/2007 . Otherwise your reservation will be cancelled...02br
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00thanks for your time02br
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00chaw su0-
  

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12br 12br 10i'm working at library . i'm writing mail to member who reserve the book to collect the book.. could you pls check my english writing?

— Osee

  • 12br 12br 10i'm working at library .
  • i'm writing mail to member who reserve the book to collect the book..
  • could you pls check my english writing?
  • so please come and collect the book till 25/1/2007 .
  • 12br 12br 10thanks for your time12br 12br 10chaw su12br 12br 12blockquote 10available,02br 02br 00replace till by "before or on"02br 02br 00for me, "thanks for your time" is not appropriate in such a situation.
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01cite10Chaw Su12cite10Dear all!12br
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10i'm working at library . i'm writing mail to member who reserve the book to collect the book.. could you pls check my english writing? or do you have any idea for writing better than this.12br
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10dear.........,12br
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10The book
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0Dear Osee,02br
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00Thank you , anyway!02br
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00chaw su!0-
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01cite10Chaw Su12cite10.12br
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10Dear.........,12br
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10The book you reserved is now available. It will be kept for you until 25/1/2007 . If you do not collect it by that date, the reservation will be cancelled.12br
10Yours sincerely12br
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0Dear feebs,02br
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00That's much better!!02br
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00thanks for your time02br
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00best wishes,02br
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00chaw su0-
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0 01blockquote
01cite10Chaw Su12cite10Dear all!12br
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10i'm working at library . i'm writing mail to member who reserve the book to collect the book.. could you pls check my english writing? or do you have any idea for writing better than this.12br
12br
10dear.........,12br
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10The book
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0Dear Anonymous,02br
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00thanks for your cooperation!02br
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00good luck!02br
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00chaw su0-
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