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Chaw Su Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you pls check my english!

0Dear all!02br
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00My manager asks me for my training plan. So I'd like to try some course and want to tell how that course is useful for me . Could you please check my English below???02br
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00" I'd like to try English course (report writting skill or presentation skill) if you allow me to. As I'm doing seminar for members every month and making presentation sometime. Moreover, I have to write some report to manager if necessary. So I hope it help me."02br
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00I think my writing isn't good. If you have better idea please help me.02br
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00thanks for your help!02br
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00With best wishes,02br
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00chaw su0-
  

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0 " I'd like to01font 00 try02font 00 01font 00[take an] 02font 00English course (report 01font 00writing02font 00 skill01font 00s02font 00 or presentation skill01font 00s02font 00) 01del 00if you allow me to02del 01font 00,02font 00 01font 00a02font 00s I'm doing01font 00 a02font 00 seminar for members every month and making presentation01font 00s02font 00 sometime01font 00s02font 00. Moreover, I have to write 01del 00some02del 00 report01font 00s02font 00 to manager01font 00s02font 00 01font 00where02font 00 necessary. 0-

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  • 0 " I'd like to01font 00 try02font 00 01font 00[take an] 02font 00English course (report 01font 00writing02font 00 skill01font 00s02font 00 or presentation skill01font 00s02font 00) 01del 00if you allow me to02del 01font 00,02font 00 01font 00a02font 00s I'm doing01font 00 a02font 00 seminar for members every month and making presentation01font 00s02font 00 sometime01font 00s02font 00.
  • Moreover, I have to write 01del 00some02del 00 report01font 00s02font 00 to manager01font 00s02font 00 01font 00where02font 00 necessary.
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0 " I'd like to01font00 try02font00 01font00[take an] 02font00English course (report 01font00writing02font00 skill01font00s02font00 or presentation skill01font00s02font00) 
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0Hi Feebs11!02br
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00Thank you so much for your help. Now I can send mail to my manager in time with your help.02br
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00I'm looking forward your help next time.02br
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00Thanks again!02br
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00With best wishes,02br
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00Chaw Su0-
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