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MarinB Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Could You please to check my motivation letter!!! please!!!

0 00Dear Sir/Madam.00I am writing to you to apply for the Bachelor’s Degree in 01b00International Business & Management Studies,02b00 in which I am particularly interested. My aim is to work in an international field related to financial and business logistic. The most actual and interesting program for me, is 01b00International Business & Management Studies.02b00 I believe, Hogeschool Utrecht with Bachelor’s degree course in 01b00International Business & Management,02b00 is the best place to achieve my career objectives.00Before I moved to Holland, I was studied in Kuban State University of Technology, in Russia, majoring in Finance and Credit. I was studied part time and worked in Book Keeper position. After 3 years of my studying, I moved to Holland, it was a reason why I’m not graduate from the University. 00The first three month in Holland I was trying to find appropriate job for me. And, I can say, it was quite difficult. Now, I have worked for 7 month, I’m doing administration job and small part of Bookkeeping. But, fair to say, it is not the job, which I dreaming to do the rest of my life. My priority is analyzing information, not only accounting. 00On my experience I have had o lot of examples of mismanaging in companies. I always was wanted to find solution of these kinds of problems. Unfortunately I don’t have enough experience and theoretical knowledge in this field. 00Therefore, I have decided to continue my education in Holland and do my favorite job. 00My desire to study in an international environment is one of the main reasons for my choice to study in English program. The other significant reason for my choice is the quality of the education provided by the European high schools. No matter in which specific field you would like to realize yourself you would have significant advantage if you have graduated in some of the prestigious European high schools.00 A completion of this Bachelor Degree in Utrecht Hogeschool will be an excellent springboard for my future career and will provide me the knowledge and confidence to realize my dreams.01b02b00Of an exceptional motivation, I strongly imply myself in my academic activities to carry out my objectives. 00Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response02br
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00You need to organize what you want to say into a number of shorter paragraphs, each dealing with a particular point that you want to make.02br
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00Try that, and repost if you want to, OK?02br
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00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0 Yes, I know about that. 02br
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00I have copied not correctly 05002br
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00Dear Sir/Madam.00I am writing to you to apply for the Bachelor’s Degree in 01b00International Business & Management Studies,02b00 in which I am particularly interested. My aim is to work in an international field related
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0I dont know what happened. When I inserted, it kooks fine. But if i send it, all paragraphs are have gone05000 May be I have to tape it here, haven't I?010id6
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0 00Dear Sir/Madam.00 00 00I am writing to you to apply for the Bachelor’s Degree in 01b00International Business & Management Studies,02b00 in which I am particularly interested. My aim is to work in an international field related to financial and business logistic. The most actual and interesting program for me, is 01b00International Business &
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0Hi,02br
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00Here are various edits and suggestions.02br
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0Yes it does02br
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0Hi,02br
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00In the link, it shows that it is a university, not a high school. So why are you mentioning high school?02br
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0I dont know05002br
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00Becouse the name is High School Utrecht. 05100 02br
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00 site of university 05200 (Universcity Utrecht) and (Hogeschool Utrecht) 05300 02br
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00They have a different program and 00requirement.02br
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00Do you think I have to write University?010id37

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