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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Could you please tell me which one is correct?

Please note that the following items were received from M/S XXXX on 10-01-2012 as per the packing list provided / Please note the we received the following items from M/S on 10-01-2012 as per the packing list enclosed

Please tell me which one is more appropriate ?
  

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Hi, Both are OK, but I prefer #2. Active Voice is more direct and simpler. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, Both are OK, but I prefer #2.
  • Active Voice is more direct and simpler.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Both are OK, but I prefer #2.
Active Voice is more direct and simpler.

Clive
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