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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Could you please take a look at my corrections please?
Could you please tell me if what I think is correct?
1 I've pictured the route/itinerary in my head. Route
2 He seems to want more than to just be friends. OK
3 3 hours of sleep won't do anything for you if not make you even more tired. OK
4 You said she resembles me, but in what way does she resemble me. I'm not sure
5 My bed is more at a slop than before. The bed is no longer level. I'm not sure
6 She acts very childish with/toward him. Both
7 It's amazing how people think that if they redeem themselves, it's okay to do wrong. OK
8 Who is this song about? OK
9 If she doesn't pick up, it'll mean that she is coming/it'll mean that she will come. Not sure
10 She won't like it if I dress like this, especially if we go out afterwards. OK
Thank you
1 I've pictured the route/itinerary in my head. Route
2 He seems to want more than to just be friends. OK
3 3 hours of sleep won't do anything for you if not make you even more tired. OK
4 You said she resembles me, but in what way does she resemble me. I'm not sure
5 My bed is more at a slop than before. The bed is no longer level. I'm not sure
6 She acts very childish with/toward him. Both
7 It's amazing how people think that if they redeem themselves, it's okay to do wrong. OK
8 Who is this song about? OK
9 If she doesn't pick up, it'll mean that she is coming/it'll mean that she will come. Not sure
10 She won't like it if I dress like this, especially if we go out afterwards. OK
Thank you
Top answer
Here are [my comments] on the sentences. 1 I've pictured the route/itinerary in my head. Route [Either, depending on what you want to say.
- Here are [my comments] on the sentences.
- 1 I've pictured the route/itinerary in my head.
- Route [Either, depending on what you want to say.
- ] 2 He seems to want more than to just be friends.
- ] 3 3 hours of sleep won't do anything for you if not make you even more tired.
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Here are [my comments] on the sentences.
1 I've pictured the route/itinerary in my head. Route
[Either, depending on what you want to say. Route could mean a path as seen on a map; itinerary could mean places and times.]
2 He seems to want more than to just be friends. OK
[Better: He seems to want to be more than just friends
1 I've pictured the route/itinerary in my head. Route
[Either, depending on what you want to say. Route could mean a path as seen on a map; itinerary could mean places and times.]
2 He seems to want more than to just be friends. OK
[Better: He seems to want to be more than just friends
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