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Kumani Posted 7 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you please revise my letter and correct my mistakes? (because I`m sure I made quite a few)

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student from (country) and very interested to study fine arts at your academy. After doing some research, I´m writing you to request more information about the portfolio and the admission in general. Firstly, I wanted to ask if I need to apply for the remote admission (because I´m living outside (country)) eventhough I´m able to attend the admission day in person?Secondly, I have a question about the home assignment. If I pick two or more assignments, is there a required number of artworks per assignment I need to create? I am looking forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully,XXX
  

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Note: I don't totally understand what happens on admission day. Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student from (country) and very interested to study in studying fine arts at your academy. After doing some research, I´m I am writing to you to request for more information about the portfolio and the admission process in general.

— Shermla

  • Note: I don't totally understand what happens on admission day.
  • Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student from (country) and very interested to study in studying fine arts at your academy.
  • After doing some research, I´m I am writing to you to request for more information about the portfolio and the admission process in general.
  • Firstly, I wanted to ask if do I need to apply for the remote admission (because I´m I am living outside (country)) even though I´m I am able to attend the on admission day in person?
  • [space] Secondly, I have a question about the home assignment.
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Note: I don't totally understand what happens on admission day.


Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student from (country) and very interested to study in studying fine arts at your academy. After doing some research, I´m I am writing to you to request for more information about the portfolio and the admission process in general

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