Could you please revise my email?
Hi everyone! I have just been assigned to my first choice dissertation project by the school and I am writing an email as a reply to my future project supervisor's meeting request and another research opportunity. Could you please help me improve my writing. Thanks a million!
Hi Tom,
Thank you for your email.
I am very pleased to have the opportunity to work with you on my first choice machine learning project. I am free next Wednesday from 13:00 to 16:00 for the meeting. If the time suits you and YYY, we can meet up to talk about the project. P.S. The next 3 weeks are strike weeks. If our meeting need to be scheduled for the next few weeks, most of the time will work for me.
With regard to the AA project: Yes, I can speak the XX dialect fluently and I am more than interested to help you build the system. I would also very much like to know about how I can assist you with this project during our meeting.
Kind regards,
XXX
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Hi Tom , (Usually we do not use first names in a business letter without an invitation do do so. That is very informal. ) Thank you for your email.
- Hi Tom , (Usually we do not use first names in a business letter without an invitation do do so.
- That is very informal.
- ) Thank you for your email.
- I am very pleased to have the opportunity to work with you on my first choice this machine learning project.
- Of all the projects, it was my first choice.
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Hi Tom, (Usually we do not use first names in a business letter without an invitation do do so. That is very informal. )
Thank you for your email.
I am very pleased to have the opportunity to work with you on my first choice this machine learning project.
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