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Debangkok Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you please revise my cover letter for apply a job

Dear All,

I would like to apply a job which relating to research position and I just have finished my master degree . Please help me edit this letter about following as detail below .

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for Marketing Research Executive position in response to your advertisement in ABC.com. I graduated from UBC University and hold a bachelors degree from the faculty of Economics and Business Administration, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Chainess Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to learn how to operate a real business as an entrepreneurial owner, including marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department stores. In addition, I was employed as a credit and marketing officer in BBC Bank. I was responsible for credit analysis in both consumer and commercial finance, credit proposals,worked in loan collections and maintained relationships with customers.

More over I have strong interest in marketing field especially CRM and I have just completed my master degre in Business Economics which concentrate on marketing and also my research regard to smartphone users and network service provider. I believe that my experience, analytical skills and understanding of research methodology these qualities would make me a excellent candidate. My resume is attached. An opportunity to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can help your company.

Yours faithfully,

BB T.k

I appreciate all comments
  

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com. I graduated from UBC University and hold a Bachelor's degree from the faculty of Economics and Business Administration, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Chainess Food business.

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  • I graduated from UBC University and hold a Bachelor's degree from the faculty of Economics and Business Administration, with a major in Business Economics.
  • I then challenged myself with my own Chainess Food business.
  • This gave me a great opportunity to learn how to operate a going-concern as an entrepreneurial owner.
  • My duties includ ed marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department stores.
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Dear Sir / Madam,

I wish to apply for the Marketing Research Executive position in response to your advertisement in ABC.com.

I graduated from UBC University and hold a Bachelor's degree from the faculty of Economics and Business Administration, with a major in Business Economics.

I then challenged myself with my own Chainess Food business. This gave
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Thank you so much for time and advise
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Thank you for kind comments

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