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The pictures illustrate some changes which have been made to an island for the development of tourism.

Overall, there are a lot of changes in the development of infrastructure and housing. The island has turned into a resort with various facilities.

In detail, the island before the introduction of tourism was completely bare apart from some palm trees. But right now, we can see that there are nine huts connected by a footpath in the center of the island, and another six huts locate in the west. These have been built to accommodate visitors to the island. The other changes in facilities are the construction of the reception building and a brand new restaurant to the north of the reception. Besides these changes in physical structure mentioned above, there is a newly constructed pier in the southern coast of the island which makes it can be easily accessible. There is also a vehicle track that connects the pier to the reception building and the restaurant. Finally, the western coast of the island is chose to become the swimming area for the tourists.