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The line graph compares households in terms of car ownership in Britain between 1971 to 2007.

Overall, the percentage of household owning one car remained relatively the same over the period shown. However, both proportion of households owning two cars and households owning three or more cars showed a gradual increase, whereas that of no car households declined significantly.

In 1971, the percentage of households with no car was the highest, at roughly 50%. On the other hand, that of households with two cars and households with three or more cars were at about 7% and 2% respectively. Over the following 8 years, the percentage of household with two cars rose by 3%. With regard to one car households, it fluctuated between 44% and 42%. From 1979 to 2007, there was a sharp drop in the percentage of no car households showed. It decreased drastically to around 25%. By contrast, the proportion of two cars households showed a considerably increase, by nearly 20%. Similarly, there was also an upward trend in that of three or more cars households, while one car households remained relatively constant.