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0The Happiest Memories in My College Life02br
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00I have never been more terrific in my college life. Every time I hold activities with others, I feel so happy and excited. The three orientations held to the freshmen I joined gave me abundant memories. When I think of these three large-scale activities, they always remind me of happiness and precious experiences.02br
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00 While preparing the activities for the orientations, we had a very good time. I made many good friends. They took a good care of me. They were just like my elder brothers and sisters. We discussed the ideas together, played together, and rehearsed the performances together. When they went out somewhere to play around, they never forgot to invite me to go with them. Also, when we heard something associated to the orientations, we became so excited.02br
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00 As we heard music or images related to the orientations, we all reacted in funny ways. When we heard the songs we used in the activities, we danced together. When we saw the pictures we took, we started to discuss the activities again. When we saw each other at school, we always said the slogans we used in the orientations. In addition, I also gained a plenty of knowledge during the orientations.02br
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00 I learned a variety of skills that I wouldn’t know from the books. I learned how to make a good performance and play it perfectly in front of the freshmen. I won’t be nervous or timid to act it out. I realized how to make a good decision for my group and enhance my group members to express their ideas confidently. Also, I knew that leading our crew in an easy and flexible way is more efficient than monitoring them all the time. Moreover, I found I’ve changed a lot, especially my personality.02br
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00 My personality has been so different from before. I used to be childish, but now I become considerable. When I have to make a decision, I always think before my leap. I am mature when I cope with problems in my daily life. I become humble to listen to other people’s suggestions. The most important thing is that now I know how to write a good proposal of coordinating an activity.02br
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00 I’ve held so many activities and knew a lot of friends. They are all important elements of my sweet memories at school. In a word, I think joining the orientations is really a wonderful thing we have to experience it at least once in college lives! 0-