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SylviaS Posted 20 years ago
Vocabulary

Could you please proofread this (it's short)? (native speaker please)

"In reply, the EU side gave a positive appreciation of recent developments in the EU-Moldova relations and expressed its belief that this positive trend would continue. The EU reckoned that there was no need to create a different cooperation mechanism, but it was indeed necessary to improve the existing one. The changes would include organisation of systematic meetings at least once a year and establishment of permanent contacts between experts from both sides."



Many thanks

Sylvia
  

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Gave a ositive appreciation seems overly wordy and consequently unintelligible. The EU approved of would be sufficient, if that is what your phrase really means.

— Mister Micawber

  • Gave a ositive appreciation seems overly wordy and consequently unintelligible.
  • The EU approved of would be sufficient, if that is what your phrase really means.
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Gave a ositive appreciation seems overly wordy and consequently unintelligible. The EU approved of would be sufficient, if that is what your phrase really means.
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thank you very much for that, are articles ok?

Sylvia
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The is optional here-- the EU-Moldova relations-- and I tend to omit them when unnecessary. Otherwise, your articles are fine.
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