I watched the movie Forrest Gump and wrote following
composition.But I think it's very miserable and I guess it contains many wrong part.
I do want this become more better one as if people living in USA wrote.
Could you please proofread following composition?
(And if you also give me your own opinion about the film,I'm appreciate about it.)
Thanks in advance
The start of this movie,there is an white feather flying in the sky
back and force with amaging background music,
it wouldn't fall on the ground.Once it fall on shoulder of a man
walking but then,wind blow there,the feather flyed again,and went
through
under a car running,finally,it lands on shoe of a man.
The man is just Forrest,Forrest Gump.
He was sitting on the bench and began to look back on his life.
When he was a child ,he was sufficiently not able to walk without leg
blases ,In addition His IQ...intelligence quotient was 75 so he had
many handicaps at the start of his life.
Thats why, He was sometimes bulied by his classmates.and He had no
friends.Except for only a girl who didn't look down him in his
school.
Her name was Jenny.In a short time, Forrest and Jenny became the
closest friends each other.
One day,He was buried by classmates.and when Jenny shouted to make him
escape from them?Run! Forest! Run!!?He began to ran for the first
time.
and his leg blases was gradually broke down,When the instrument was
completely broken down, He ran and ran faster than any other children
,and they all was not able to catch Forest Gump.
The part of first scene of this movie,Forrest said "You want a
chocolate? "I" could eat about a million and a half of these."I
thought ...he made a lie,didnt he?
Needless to say,It is too mach for a man to eat the number of chocolates.
but he was able to drink 15 bottles of Dr.Pepper,and when he was
chased by classmates,this time they went after him with [their jeep],
Nevertheless Forrest was able to escape from them with his [legs].
and because of this his incredible runnning speed , he won admission
to University of Alabama.
Also after that,he was able to overcome any obstacle and achieved
various incredible feats.
In his childfood,odd dance of Forest wearing leg braces inspired Elvis
Presley's gyrating dance,and it became famous soon after that.
When he was an University Student,he meet President Kennedy,As
football player in American National team.
President asked him "Congratulations, how does it feel to be an
All-American?",He answered "I gotta Pee".
How fearless he was!
After that,he enter the army, and went to bietnum war. And serving his
many teammates's life there,he achieve Medal of Honor from president
Johnson after the war.This time,He showed his hip to Tv cameras.
?????
He was made to paticipate anti-war-movement and was made to make a
speech.Additionally,he was forced to join Black Panther Party(jenny)
to serve african american rights.
President Nixon directed Forrest to join American national table
tennis team,so forrest play matches of table tennis with chinese top
players.
After that,he established a company for shrimping to keep faith with
his hriend dead in Bietnum war,.
(Believe it or not, Bubba Gump shrimp co. and More than forty
restaurants this company runs actually exist in our actual world.)
Forrest appeared on TV with John Lennon and was interviewed.
He ran across America more than four times with a lot of his company.
What is Forrest Gump? a company? country? a geneus group? No,You may
not believe it,Forrest Gump is written as only...only a Man,
Although he had frends Tex,Dallas,and other charactristic peopel and
only had incredible energy.
"Forrest Gump" is war film,but is also success story ,human drama,love romance.
Also is this a Science Fiction? No,this isn't. but In the original
work of Forest Gump(novel version), He traveled Univerce with …a
monkey.
I Love this story.
He can do anything only alone.I'm expired by it.
I'm moved what he can give the half of his achievement to people who
buckup him as token.
Having seen what he said,"I'm not a smart man,but I know what love
is.",I admire him a little.
The people around him are also attractive.I must admit the place where
they are living is the fiction.but Simultaneously and actually,I can
hear their breathing.?
It seems that this story is constracted so that all of kind people can enjoy.
but in a sense,I thought people become one when they are moved by this film
as if they are chocolates in a chocolate box. this movie made me feel so.
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