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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you, please, proofread it?

Hi everybody!
Could you, please, proofread the following paragraph?

Today, all kinds of goodies come in small packages. Supposedly, it should help sweet teeth cut back on their portion sizes. However, a study published in Journal of Consumer Research shows that the reality of small packages is different.

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Today, all kinds of goodies come in small packages. Supposedly, they should help the sweet-toothed cut back on their portion sizes. However, a study published in the Journal of Consumer Research shows that the reality of small packaging is different.

  • Today, all kinds of goodies come in small packages.
  • Supposedly, they should help the sweet-toothed cut back on their portion sizes.
  • However, a study published in the Journal of Consumer Research shows that the reality of small packaging is different.
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Today, all kinds of goodies come in small packages. Supposedly, they should help the sweet-toothed cut back on their portion sizes. However, a study published in the Journal of Consumer Research shows that the reality of small packaging is different.
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Wonderful attempt of proofreading on behalf of Mister Micawber. I appreciate it greEmotion: smileatly!
Mister Micawber

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