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Demart28 Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

could you please help with this paragraph?

I have discovered how to exchange inspiration and a creative flare working with students and mutual inspiration necessary to improve design ability.
I am very satisfied/pleased to have opportunity and chance to work in educational environment, which give me more satisfaction than any other kind of career in Art.
During my employment as a lecturer I have had a chance to work as a leading lecturer and develope author’s educational programme.
  

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I am very satisfied/ pleased to have the opportunity and chance to work in an educational environment, which give s me more satisfaction than any other kind of career in Art. During my employment as a lecturer, I have had a chance to work as senior lecturer and to develop an educational programme. I have also discovered that I have a creative flare working with students, and have learned how to impart the inspiration necessary to improve design ability.

  • I am very satisfied/ pleased to have the opportunity and chance to work in an educational environment, which give s me more satisfaction than any other kind of career in Art.
  • During my employment as a lecturer, I have had a chance to work as senior lecturer and to develop an educational programme.
  • I have also discovered that I have a creative flare working with students, and have learned how to impart the inspiration necessary to improve design ability.
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I am very satisfied/pleased to have the opportunity and chance to work in an educational environment, which gives me more satisfaction than any other kind of career in Art. During my employment as a lecturer, I have had a chance to work as senior lecturer and to develop an educational programme. I have also discovered that I have a c
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yes it sounds great!
thanks again

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