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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Could you please HELP with these 5 HARD sentences?

Could you please help me make these natural?

1 There are so many storylines that you want to know what happens. It's a nice show.

2 We live twice as low. He lives on the 15th floor. I live on the 7th.

3 He rejoiced at the fact that his baby had done something so banal.

4 If I had said that, she would hate me especially now that I've done that.

5 We live so high up that we can't hear anything that goes on on the streets.

Thank you so much
  

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alc24 5 We live so high up that we can't hear anything that goes on on the streets. This is fine, you can add a comma after the first 'on' just to break up the repetition of 'on' but otherwise it's natural sounding. alc24 4 If I had said that, she would hate me especially now that I've done that.

— Makka2802

  • alc24 5 We live so high up that we can't hear anything that goes on on the streets.
  • This is fine, you can add a comma after the first 'on' just to break up the repetition of 'on' but otherwise it's natural sounding.
  • alc24 4 If I had said that, she would hate me especially now that I've done that.
  • "If I had said that, she would hate me especially now that I've done it " is fine, although it does make me wonder why she would hate you more had you said what you've now done; more information is required.
  • alc24 3 He rejoiced at the fact that his baby had done something so banal.
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alc24 5 We live so high up that we can't hear anything that goes on on the streets.
This is fine, you can add a comma after the first 'on' just to break up the repetition of 'on' but otherwise it's natural sounding.

alc24 4 If I had said that, she would hate me especially now that I've done that.
"If I had said tha
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