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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Could you please help with correcting sentences?
Could you please help me correct these sentences please? I'm not sure they are correct?
1 He is not to experience things not of his age. He's too young to see his parents fighting. Not sure
2 I hate kids that when you play with their toy, all of a sudden they feel like playing with the same toy. Sounds off
3 I've been walking with a limp for so many years that every time I play a character who doesn't have a limp it's hard for me. (actor) OK
4 What kind of music are you listening to on/with/in those headphones? (natural?) ON I think
5 The tournament is getting closer to the finals, so the prices of the seats are more expensive. (this sound really unnatural, please help make it natural) BOTH I'd say
6 You have 2 times as much chance of crashing if you take 2 planes as if you take one. I have no clue
Thank you so much
1 He is not to experience things not of his age. He's too young to see his parents fighting. Not sure
2 I hate kids that when you play with their toy, all of a sudden they feel like playing with the same toy. Sounds off
3 I've been walking with a limp for so many years that every time I play a character who doesn't have a limp it's hard for me. (actor) OK
4 What kind of music are you listening to on/with/in those headphones? (natural?) ON I think
5 The tournament is getting closer to the finals, so the prices of the seats are more expensive. (this sound really unnatural, please help make it natural) BOTH I'd say
6 You have 2 times as much chance of crashing if you take 2 planes as if you take one. I have no clue
Thank you so much
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Here are my suggestions. Chalk alc24 1 He is not to experience things not of his age. He's too young to see his parents fighting.
- Here are my suggestions.
- Chalk alc24 1 He is not to experience things not of his age.
- He's too young to see his parents fighting.
- Not sure [He shouldn't experience things that are inappropriate for his age.
- ] 2 I hate kids that when you play with their toy, all of a sudden they feel like playing with the same toy.
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Here are my suggestions.
Chalk
Chalk
alc241 He is not to experience things not of his age. He's too young to see his parents fighting. Not sure [He shouldn't experience things that are inappropriate for his age. He's too young to see his parents fighting.]
2 I hate kids that when you play with their toy, all of a sudden
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Hello Chalk,
Thank you for your corrections, It's a lot of help, but one thing
You're twice as likely to crash if you take two planes than if you take one.
Wouldn't it be "You're twice as likely to crash if you take two planes AS if you take one."
Thank you Chalk so much
Thank you for your corrections, It's a lot of help, but one thing
You're twice as likely to crash if you take two planes than if you take one.
Wouldn't it be "You're twice as likely to crash if you take two planes AS if you take one."
Thank you Chalk so much
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