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"When I finish my MA at ............university, I hope to return (country) and work for the Department of Tourism, take care of marketing and investment part. I hope at the age of 50, I will be the youngest president of or at least, at 45, I can be the minister of tourism. Speaking and understanding English, German, Chinese and ......ese for sure will be helpful for my job of any part in the future.



I always asked myself few question like: why most tourists don’t want to visit again? Why tourists do not spend much money while travelling in compare to or ? Why our products are not famous? Why .....ese people always prefer to use Famous but Expensive products form or ? Why our products can not reach our people? Why people don’t know much about ? People see that (country) is a blooming country but they don’t see or can not see things behind like there are many poor people, business is growing but not in country sides, rich people is getting richer, poor people is still poor, they build a road or house just to use for few years but not for 30 – 40 years, many organizations are wasting money from government, business laws are not tight... I realise there are a lot things to do back there and still there are many things for me to apply my knowledge. I hope after finish the MA of International Business and Marketing from ...........university, I will be able to answer and solve those problems"