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Bmatt Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you please help me with the introduction of this essay?
0 Question: Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings? 02 br
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00 My introduction paragraph is like this: 02 br
00 According to the recent research, there are 50 to 100 million of animals worldwide , from Zebra-fish to non-human primates, are used in scientific experiments. Yet at the same time, whether human should conduct experiment on animals is subject to much debate. Some one think it is beneficial for human while others argue that it should be band. I agree with the former view, but with reservations. 02 br
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00 Could you please help me to review and give me some suggestions? 02 br
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00 Many Thanks, 02 br
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00 My introduction paragraph is like this: 02 br
00 According to the recent research, there are 50 to 100 million of animals worldwide , from Zebra-fish to non-human primates, are used in scientific experiments. Yet at the same time, whether human should conduct experiment on animals is subject to much debate. Some one think it is beneficial for human while others argue that it should be band. I agree with the former view, but with reservations. 02 br
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00 Could you please help me to review and give me some suggestions? 02 br
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00 Many Thanks, 02 br
00 Matt 0-
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] 02 b 00 to non-human primates, are used in scientific experiments. Yet at the same time, 01 b 00 the question of 02 b 00 whether human 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 should conduct experiment 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 on animals is subject to much debate. Some 01 del 00 one 02 del 00 think it is beneficial for human 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 while others argue that it should be 01 del 00 band 02 del 00 01 b 00 banned 02 b 00 .
- ] 02 b 00 to non-human primates, are used in scientific experiments.
- Yet at the same time, 01 b 00 the question of 02 b 00 whether human 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 should conduct experiment 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 on animals is subject to much debate.
- Some 01 del 00 one 02 del 00 think it is beneficial for human 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 while others argue that it should be 01 del 00 band 02 del 00 01 b 00 banned 02 b 00 .
- 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 To be perfectly honest, I don't know which of "zebra-fish", "zebra fish" and "zebrafish" are accepted spellings.
- Possibly all three are OK.
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0 A few changes are needed to tidy up the grammar/spelling, but otherwise I think your opening paragraph is fine. 02 br
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01 i 00 According to 01 del 00 the 02 del 00 recent research, 01 del 00 there are 02 del 00 50 to 100 million 01 del 00 of 02 del 00 animals worldwide, from 01 del 00 Zebra-fish 0
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