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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Dear Ms. Becks:
I would like to apply for the position of Sales Manager advertised in the 16 October issue of the Bangkok Post. I have extensive experience in the Sales Management Profession and I am familiar with computer applications such as Microsoft word and Excel.
I am presently employed as a Sales Manager and have held this position for the last 3 years. Some of my responsibilities have included training new staff and planning products.To be an energetic, responsible, analytical and honest person, I am confident that I will be able to perform my duties to your satisfaction.
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you in person about what I contribution I could give to your company. I can be contacted at 081-658-8888
Sincerely yours,
please help me correct this. thank you.
I would like to apply for the position of Sales Manager advertised in the 16 October issue of the Bangkok Post. I have extensive experience in the Sales Management Profession and I am familiar with computer applications such as Microsoft word and Excel.
I am presently employed as a Sales Manager and have held this position for the last 3 years. Some of my responsibilities have included training new staff and planning products.To be an energetic, responsible, analytical and honest person, I am confident that I will be able to perform my duties to your satisfaction.
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you in person about what I contribution I could give to your company. I can be contacted at 081-658-8888
Sincerely yours,
please help me correct this. thank you.
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It is very well done. Dear Ms. Becks: I would like to apply for the position of Sales Manager , as advertised in the 16 October number of the Bangkok Post.
- It is very well done.
- Dear Ms.
- Becks: I would like to apply for the position of Sales Manager , as advertised in the 16 October number of the Bangkok Post.
- I have extensive experience in sales management, and I am familiar with computer applications such as Microsoft Word and Excel.
- I am presently employed as Sales Manager at ABC Company and have held this position for the last three years.
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It is very well done.
Dear Ms. Becks:
I would like to apply for the position of Sales Manager, as advertised in the 16 October number of the Bangkok Post. I have extensive experience in sales management, and I am familiar with computer applications such as Microsoft Word and Excel.
I am presently employed as Sales
It is very well done.
Dear Ms. Becks:
I would like to apply for the position of Sales Manager, as advertised in the 16 October number of the Bangkok Post. I have extensive experience in sales management, and I am familiar with computer applications such as Microsoft Word and Excel.
I am presently employed as Sales
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