Could you please help me with Ielts Writing Task 1

The line graph compares five nations in Europe in terms of the percentage of women in parliament over the 12-year period.

Overall, all five countries witnessed an upward trend in the percentage of women in parliament. The UK saw the most dramatic change and Italy had the highest percentage of females in parliament at the end of the period.

In 2000, the percentage of females in German stood at the highest point (36%) compared to the other four nations. The figure then rose slightly, reaching a peak of around 38%. France experienced a similar trend. There was a gradual increase in the percentage of women in Italy parliament from about 27% in 2000 to just under 40% in 2012.

In 2000, there was about 17% in the percentage of females in parliament in Belgium. The figure then rose slightly to around 24% in 2008 before falling to 23% in 2012. Despite starting at the lowest point, the percentage of women in parliament in the UK increased significantly to reach the peak of 23% which was equal to that of Belgium in 2012.