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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Could you please help me to correct my sentences

With due respect, this is to inform you that it is great pleasure of mine that my daughter Helen is student of IX at your prestigious institute but unfortunately, according to my work requirement that I have to shift from this city.
It will no longer be appropriate or convenient for my child to study here.
Therefore, I am writing to request a school leaving certificate for my daughter so that, she can continue her education in her new school.
I shall be obliged to you if you will issue my daughter school leaving certificate with the promotion next grade.
  

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It is far too obsequious to survive. Use this only: Dear Mr/Ms [surname], My daughter Helen is currently a student of IX at your institute, but unfortunately we are moving from the city, so I am writing to request a school leaving certificate with a promotion to the next grade for her. Thank you for your assistance.

— Mister Micawber

  • It is far too obsequious to survive.
  • Use this only: Dear Mr/Ms [surname], My daughter Helen is currently a student of IX at your institute, but unfortunately we are moving from the city, so I am writing to request a school leaving certificate with a promotion to the next grade for her.
  • Thank you for your assistance.
  • Sincerely yours, (signed)
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It is far too obsequious to survive. Use this only:

Dear Mr/Ms [surname],

My daughter Helen is currently a student of IX at your institute, but unfortunately we are moving from the city, so I am writing to request a school leaving certificate with a promotion to the next grade for her.

Thank you for your assistance.

Sincerely yours,
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