Could you please help me review my writing task 1 in the IELTS test? I honestly appreciate that.

Here is the question: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VesdUJKeVqOYD82_WKuEVOF8o6aVA2aC/view?usp=sharing (source: https://ieltsfocus.com/2017/05/15/ielts-graphs-future-trend/)

Provided is the line graph which depicts the expected amount of prefabricated cars of five countries, which are China, UK, Japan, USA in the fifteen-year period from 2020 to 2035, measured in thousands.

In general, China’s products will have slightly increases by 2035 while the others will have significantly decreased in terms of producing cars.

In the beginning of aforementioned period,2020, Japan leads the market with the noticeable figure - 350, meanwhile China has the lowest number at 100. At the same time, the UK’s and USA’s produced car quantity orderly two-folds and three-folds China’s one. In the next five-year period, it is estimated that Japan will continue remain the market leader position while grow to roughly 370 thousand cars. Similarly, China is going to witness a slight increase to 120. Sparkly, the USA is predicted to plummet from 300 to 200 by 2025 while UK’s figure is about 280 already. By 2030, even though Japan will have declined its production to 300, it won’t be enthroned. Both the UK and the USA will noticeably plunge to 100 while being outraced by China with 140000 cars. Finally in 2035, the dramatical decline is predicted to happen to Japan, reaching exactly 100. By 2035, China will have been the market leader at 160 thousand manufactured cars and the USA is going to reach an all-time low of 30 and UK will be just a little higher at 50.