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Minhhai2209 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Could you please help me refine my cover letter?
Hi. Below is my cover letter. Could you please help me refine my cover letter? Thanks in advance.
Dear Mr. ABC:
According to the letter you sent me at my dissertation’s oral examination/According to the advertisement on some-website.com, XXX is recruiting fresh graduates for the position of software engineers. As a recent graduate of YYY with a Bachelor's Degree in Computer Science, I would like to apply for that position at your company.
{Praise XXX}. I understand that in order to maintain these successes, XXX needs highly competent employees, and I believe I can meet the company’s expectation. After four years of extensive training at the university, I have acquired a good background in programming and problem solving. Besides, my keenness in learning can help the company take on new challenges. Finally, my experience in academic team assignments will allow me to contribute to ongoing projects in the company.
Attached is a copy of my CV, which more fully details my background for the position. If you want to know any additional information, please fell free to reach me on my number 0123456789. I am looking forward to hear from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Dear Mr. ABC:
According to the letter you sent me at my dissertation’s oral examination/According to the advertisement on some-website.com, XXX is recruiting fresh graduates for the position of software engineers. As a recent graduate of YYY with a Bachelor's Degree in Computer Science, I would like to apply for that position at your company.
{Praise XXX}. I understand that in order to maintain these successes, XXX needs highly competent employees, and I believe I can meet the company’s expectation. After four years of extensive training at the university, I have acquired a good background in programming and problem solving. Besides, my keenness in learning can help the company take on new challenges. Finally, my experience in academic team assignments will allow me to contribute to ongoing projects in the company.
Attached is a copy of my CV, which more fully details my background for the position. If you want to know any additional information, please fell free to reach me on my number 0123456789. I am looking forward to hear from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
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By the way, can I say "Attached includes my CV and my academic result, which more fully detail my background for the position"?
- By the way, can I say "Attached includes my CV and my academic result, which more fully detail my background for the position"?
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By the way, can I say "Attached includes my CV and my academic result, which more fully detail my background for the position"?
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