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Bbser Posted 15 years ago
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Could you please help me polish this short paragraph?

I was impressed when I found out that TBC has over 10,000 associates, earned $1 billion revenues in 2010, and has been named a Top 50 Company for three years in a row. I believe that TBC not only possesses great people, delivers great service, and achieves great results, but also is embracing a greater future!



Could you please help me polish this short paragraph? Thanks a lot.

BBSER
  

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I was impressed when I found out that TBC has over 10,000 associates, grossed $1 billion in 2010, and has been named a Top 50 Company for three years in a row. I believe that TBC not only possesses great staff , delivers great service, and achieves great results, but also is embracing a greater future!

— Mister Micawber

  • I was impressed when I found out that TBC has over 10,000 associates, grossed $1 billion in 2010, and has been named a Top 50 Company for three years in a row.
  • I believe that TBC not only possesses great staff , delivers great service, and achieves great results, but also is embracing a greater future!
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I was impressed when I found out that TBC has over 10,000 associates, grossed $1 billion in 2010, and has been named a Top 50 Company for three years in a row. I believe that TBC not only possesses great staff, delivers great service, and achieves great results, but also is embracing a greater future!
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