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Bbser Posted 15 years ago
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Could you please help me polish this sentence?

This sentence is supposed to be put in a resume to describe a achievement in my work history.

Could you please help me make it sounds normal and powerful/positive/attractive? Thanks a lot for your time!



Designed innovative and crucial algorithm within first three weeks of three-month trial period, and got promoted to be formal employee immediately after that.
  

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Designed an innovative and crucial algorithm during my trial period and was promptly promoted to permanent staff .

  • Designed an innovative and crucial algorithm during my trial period and was promptly promoted to permanent staff .
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Designed an innovative and crucial algorithm during my trial period and was promptly promoted to permanent staff.
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Thank you, Mister.

BBSER

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