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Interstellar cloud Posted 7 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you please help me improve my email?

Hi all,
Could you please help me improve my email? I was also wondering is there a better way to start my email than saying "I am writing to enquire about....". Thank you so much.

Subject: Enquiry Regarding Course Re-enrollment

Dear xx,

I am writing to enquire about my course re-enrollment arrangements.

Could you please tell me if I will take the Machine Learning exam at its subsequent exam date? Is it correct that I should submit all my missing assignments before the corresponding deadline, or can I submit them before the deadline?

Thank you for your help!

Yours truly,
xxx

  

Top answer

Your email is very confusing. Write clear sentences. No one can answer if you will take this exam, because you might be sick on the date it is given.

— AlpheccaStars

  • Your email is very confusing.
  • Write clear sentences.
  • No one can answer if you will take this exam, because you might be sick on the date it is given.
  • Here is a clear question: When am I scheduled to take the Machine Learning exam?
  • I see on the course schedule that it will be given on October 13 at 2 pm.
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Your email is very confusing. Write clear sentences. No one can answer if you will take this exam, because you might be sick on the date it is given.

Here is a clear question:

When am I scheduled to take the Machine Learning exam? I see on the course schedule that it will be given on October 13 at 2 pm. May I take the exam at that time, or do I have to wait for the next schedu

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