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The graph below shows the number of visitors to two different tourist attractions in the city of Grenby during one particular week.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares how many people visiting Grenby History Museum and Grenby Amusement Park in Grenby city each day for a week.

Overall, most people tend to visit those two attractions on the weekend. Also, the number of visitors to the Amusement Park is always higher than visitors to the History Museum.

According to the graph, the number of visitors to the Grenby History Museum varies during the week. On Monday, 250 people visit the museum. This figure drops down to only 200 visitors on Tuesday and remains unchanged on Wednesday. On the next day, the number decreases slightly to a little bit under 200 people, which is the lowest point. Then, it suddenly surges to a peak on Saturday with 400 visitors. On the last day of the week, it is down to only 350 visitors.

Grenby Amusement Park attracts far more visitors than the Grenby History Museum. On Monday, when there are the least people, only 300 people come to visit this place. This number rises a bit to 350 people on Tuesday and then drops back to 300 people again on Wednesday. After that, there is a surge in the number of visitors until the end of the week. In detail, the number of visitors is 450, just under 500, and 700 on Thursday, Friday, and Saturday respectively. On Sunday, the number reaches its peak with about 800 guests.

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