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Debangkok Posted 17 years ago
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Could you please help me correct these sentenes for my preparing.

Hi there,

I would like to prepare my answer for my interview but I do not sure about its gramma,please help me about this.

I apply a job the position of Academic Officer at Entrepreneurial Program,please find my answer below.

1.My strengh

- I have a service mind

- I keep track of economic news

- I have a entrepreneurship

- I have a related experience such as securities, finance

2.My weakness

- Sometime I think through more that make me late to implementation

3.Why do u interest in this position?

- I have experience in entrepreneurship that I can share it to here.

- T he educational field is anather field that I have interest.

- I think my experience and knowledge would contribute to this job well

4. Why did you change your jobs usually?

every time that I quite my jobs I have good resons

5.How long would you work here?

I can not tell you about my acually time but I utilized my fully capacity on every jobs that I have done.

5.What do u think about a good and success entreprenuer.

- I think it same like every success that are attitude, positive thinking, patient and saw in others not.

6.How about your business was?

- I t was not good because I ran in chiness food that genuine chiness food that made people were not familar and not good in location, light traffic.

7. How about the economic situation now.

Thai economy went into recession economy along globle financial crisis but now I think there are positive signal such as unemployment decreasing, private spening more and I believe in the stimurus projects of this government that could booth thai economy not bad and We would see a positive growth by the end of this year

Thank you in advance , I appreciate every comment
  

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My weaknesses - Sometimes I spend too much time thinking through a problem or project, which makes me slow in implementing it. Wh y are you interested in this position? - I have experience in entrepreneurship that I can share.

  • My weaknesses - Sometimes I spend too much time thinking through a problem or project, which makes me slow in implementing it.
  • Wh y are you interested in this position?
  • - I have experience in entrepreneurship that I can share.
  • - Education is another field that interests me.
  • - I think my experience and knowledge will contribute to this job.
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1.My strengths

- I have a service-oriented attitude
- I keep track of economic news
- I have entrepreneurship
- I have related experience in securities& finance

2.My weaknesses

- Sometimes I spend too much time thinking through a problem or project, which makes me slow in implementing it.
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Thank you so my for your all comments.

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