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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Could you please help me correct these sentences please?
Could you please help me correct these sentences grammatically please?
1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying.
2 Can't you make it easier on/for me rather than making things harder on/for me.
3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. It makes me sad. It saddens me.
4 What does spending time with you entail/mean?
5 Let's forget this day ever existed.
6 I can tell from the way you shake/are shaking if you are crying.
7 Not one day has gone by that/when I didn't get your attention.
8 (By) looking at you, you'd think you were dying.
9 Will I have to keep doing that if I come with you?
10 You think your tooth is loose but that just a sensation/feeling.
11 In no other country will you receive unemployment benefits like the ones here.
12 His 2 front teeth are too close together./too apart.
13 She doesn't blush while getting hit on by a guy.
14 My favorite part of myself is my lips.
Thank you so much
Alc
1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying.
2 Can't you make it easier on/for me rather than making things harder on/for me.
3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. It makes me sad. It saddens me.
4 What does spending time with you entail/mean?
5 Let's forget this day ever existed.
6 I can tell from the way you shake/are shaking if you are crying.
7 Not one day has gone by that/when I didn't get your attention.
8 (By) looking at you, you'd think you were dying.
9 Will I have to keep doing that if I come with you?
10 You think your tooth is loose but that just a sensation/feeling.
11 In no other country will you receive unemployment benefits like the ones here.
12 His 2 front teeth are too close together./too apart.
13 She doesn't blush while getting hit on by a guy.
14 My favorite part of myself is my lips.
Thank you so much
Alc
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Hi 1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying. OK 2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me. 3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before.
- Hi 1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying.
- OK 2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me.
- 3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before.
- One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved.
- It makes me sad.
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Hi
1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying. OK
2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me.
3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. It makes me sad
1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying. OK
2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me.
3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. It makes me sad
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1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; such as when she's crying or upset.
2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me.
This is similar, but has a different meaning:
Can't you be easier on me, rather than being hard on me?
3 I don't want to have a
2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me.
This is similar, but has a different meaning:
Can't you be easier on me, rather than being hard on me?
3 I don't want to have a
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Here are the sentences where I have something to add.
1. Use a colon, not a semi-colon.
3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. [This is a sentence fragment, but conversationally okay. ] It makes me sad. It saddens me. [Don't you
1. Use a colon, not a semi-colon.
3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. [This is a sentence fragment, but conversationally okay. ] It makes me sad. It saddens me. [Don't you
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