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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Could you please help me correct these sentences?

Could you please help me make these sentences grammatical?

1 I won't be able to hold this schedule out much longer. It's a strain on my marriage. I'm away 2 whole weeks out of the month because of my work schedule plus it's tiring.

2 If he's here as much as he's at his other hotels, then he doesn't work a whole lot as I never see him. (talking about the manager of hotels)

3 I only took out the trash can that was the fullest/the fullest trash can.

4 I had to wait for all the transactions to go through before I could start with the procedure.

5 All the credit card transactions are taken into account at midnight.

6 With my present work schedule, my body seems to rest better than with my old one as now I have 3 days off in a row.

Thank you
  

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Here are my suggestions. 1 I won't be able to hold to (or: keep to/stay on) this schedule out much longer. It's a strain on my marriage.

  • Here are my suggestions.
  • 1 I won't be able to hold to (or: keep to/stay on) this schedule out much longer.
  • It's a strain on my marriage.
  • I'm away 2 whole weeks out of the month because of my work schedule , plus it's tiring.
  • 2 If he's here as often much as he's at his other hotels, then he doesn't work a whole lot since a s I never see him.
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Here are my suggestions.

1 I won't be able to hold to (or: keep to/stay on) this schedule out much longer. It's a strain on my marriage. I'm away 2 whole weeks out of the month because of my work schedule, plus it's tiring.

2 If he's here as often much as he's at his other hotels, then he doesn't work a whole lot since
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Thank you Doctor D,

Thank you for everything:

If you get a chance and would like to help me by making sure these are correct or help me correct it, I'd appreciate it greatly.

I had a few threads I'm struggling with. I translate them from french for my book I'm translating.



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