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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Could you please help me correct these sentences?

Could you please help me make these sentences grammatical?

1 I can't fall asleep at 10 pm when I woke up at noon that same day, especially when I didn't do so much as go out the whole day. I won't be tired enough to sleep.
2 Come september, she would leave the company.
3 If she were dying, she would contact us.
4 She got that for me as a birthday present.
5 That's all the juice there was left in the carton.
6 There wasn't a whole lot of information to be divulged.

THank you
  

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1 I can't fall asleep at 10 pm when I woke up at noon that same day, especially when I didn't do so much as go out the whole day. I won't be tired enough to sleep. [ok - I would suggest "...

— Free_spirit

  • 1 I can't fall asleep at 10 pm when I woke up at noon that same day, especially when I didn't do so much as go out the whole day.
  • I won't be tired enough to sleep.
  • [ok - I would suggest "...
  • "] 2 Come september, she would leave the company.
  • [ok] 3 If she were dying, she would contact us.
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1 I can't fall asleep at 10 pm when I woke up at noon that same day, especially when I didn't do so much as go out the whole day. I won't be tired enough to sleep.
[ok - I would suggest "... especially when I didn't even go out the whole day."]

2 Come september, she would leave the company. [ok]
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