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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
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Could you please help me correct 4 points?

Could you please help me correct these sentences?

1 How can you base a movie on a video game?/How can a movie be based on a video game?

2 It takes the author 3 chapters to get to the 20 minutes point in the movie/to cover 20 minutes of the movie.

3 Which of these is correct please?

Why can't the train ever pull in as/while I get there.

Why can't the train ever pull in as/while I'm getting there.

Why can't I ever get there as/while the train pulls in.

Why can't I ever get there as/while the train is pulling in.

Do these 2 sentences mean the same thing?

Train A pulls in while train B is pulling in. = Train B has started pulling in when train A pulls in.

Train B pulls in while train A is pulling in. = Train A has started pulling in when train B pulls in.

4 Are these all correct?

I can last 2 months off/on/with this money.

I can hold out 2 months on/off this money.

I can live on this money 2 months.
I can live off this money 2 months.


Thank you so much
  

Top answer

1 Both are fine. 2 20-minute [no 's'] point in the movie or to cover... 3 The 4th sentence best conveys your message.

  • 1 Both are fine.
  • 2 20-minute [no 's'] point in the movie or to cover...
  • 3 The 4th sentence best conveys your message.
  • I think it's too much juggling of tenses which isn't really necessary.
  • Much more natural: Train A and Train B pull in at the same time.
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1 Both are fine.

2 20-minute [no 's'] point in the movie or to cover...

3 The 4th sentence best conveys your message.

I think it's too much juggling of tenses which isn't really necessary. Much more natural: Train A and Train B pull in at the same time.

4 All are ok. Some natives would add "for" in 2, 3 & 4

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