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Arif Orçun Şeker Posted 9 years ago
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COULD YOU PLEASE HELP ME?
I would appreciate if you could check my below letter and correct my mistakes. Thank you
"Dear Partners,
We would like to share some news from XXX company, while we are very close to the end of 2016.
We have increased our overall sales by 20 % in 2016 year.
We keep investing on our production capacity in parallel with increase of our sales.
We are happy to inform you that, our new production line will be actively running by June 2017.
Our production capacity will be reach to 3 million units / annually and it will be giving us flexibility for shorter lead times than sector average.
Meantime, there were a period during 2016, which effected lenght of our regular delivery times due to unforesen reasons.
Please accept our sincere apologizes, if that period caused any problem for your business.
Thank you for your partnership and continuous support."
"Dear Partners,
We would like to share some news from XXX company, while we are very close to the end of 2016.
We have increased our overall sales by 20 % in 2016 year.
We keep investing on our production capacity in parallel with increase of our sales.
We are happy to inform you that, our new production line will be actively running by June 2017.
Our production capacity will be reach to 3 million units / annually and it will be giving us flexibility for shorter lead times than sector average.
Meantime, there were a period during 2016, which effected lenght of our regular delivery times due to unforesen reasons.
Please accept our sincere apologizes, if that period caused any problem for your business.
Thank you for your partnership and continuous support."
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