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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Could you please help?

Hello. Could you please help. I'm writing a story where a boy is hiding from some bad guys in a building. He (and his teddy bear) hides in an air duct and then -

Ben kicked out a ceiling vent, pushed the teddy bear out, and dropped down into the room.

Does the sentence work perfectly?

  

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anonymous Hello. Could you please help. I'm writing a story where a boy is hiding from some bad guys in a building.

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  • anonymous Hello.
  • Could you please help.
  • I'm writing a story where a boy is hiding from some bad guys in a building.
  • He (and his teddy bear) hides in an air duct and then - Ben kicked out a ceiling vent, pushed the teddy bear out, and dropped down into the room.
  • Does the sentence work perfectly?
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anonymous

Hello. Could you please help. I'm writing a story where a boy is hiding from some bad guys in a building. He (and his teddy bear) hides in an air duct and then -

Ben kicked out a ceiling vent, pushed the teddy bear out, and dropped down into the room.

Does the sentence work perfectly?

It is a natural sentence.

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It’s ok. You’re using phrasal verbs and the first two utilize the particle “out.” The second instance separates the particle from the main verb while the first has them together. You might consider changing them up.

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