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AnRan Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you please have a look at my covering letter? Thanks a lot!

0 Hello, 02br
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00I would really appreciate your help for correcting my motivation letter. As I did not find any job corresponding to my key qualification, I have to make a spontaneous candidature. 02br
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00Thank you in advance for your advise!!! 02br
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00AnRan 02br
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00Dear Sir, Dear Madam, 02br
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00As I would like to orient my career towards a field closer to my main qualification, I am pleased to send you my CV for a job in our company. 02br
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00Actually, my Chinese studies, including linguistic and cultural aspects, as well as my commercial experience gained over the past years, make me naturally turn toward your company where I would be delighted to work in direct contact with Asian countries. 02br
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00Moreover, we have reached the beginning of an era during which China will doubtless present itself as an influential participant, if not impossible to bypass, in the world economy. This is within this framework that I submit my application for a job in your company, since I believe that the key elements of my qualifications and experience could constitute an added value to your firm. 02br
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00Thanking you in advance for the attention you will pay to my application, I would be delighted (glad??) to meet you in order to convince you furthermore of my motivation. 02br
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00Yours faithfully 0-
  

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0 Dear Sir or Madam (if you are sending a letter in on the offchance it would still be much more polite to telephone and get a name to send it to. 02br 02br 00As I would like to orient my career towards a field closer to my main qualifications, I am sending you my CV in the hope that I might suit an upcoming vacancy at your company. 02br 02br 00My Chinese studies, including linguistic and cultural aspects, as well as the commercial experience I have gained over the past few years, have made me look at your company, where I would be delighted to work in direct contact with Asian countries.

  • 0 Dear Sir or Madam (if you are sending a letter in on the offchance it would still be much more polite to telephone and get a name to send it to.
  • 02br 02br 00As I would like to orient my career towards a field closer to my main qualifications, I am sending you my CV in the hope that I might suit an upcoming vacancy at your company.
  • 02br 02br 00My Chinese studies, including linguistic and cultural aspects, as well as the commercial experience I have gained over the past few years, have made me look at your company, where I would be delighted to work in direct contact with Asian countries.
  • 02br 02br 00Moreover, we have reached the beginning of an era during which China will doubtless present itself as an influential participant in the world economy.
  • Therefore I believe that the key elements of my qualifications and experience could be highly valuable to your firm.
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0 Dear Sir or Madam (if you are sending a letter in on the offchance it would still be much more polite to telephone and get a name to send it to. 02br
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00As I would like to orient my career towards a field closer to my main qualifications, I am sending you my CV in the hope that I might suit an upcoming vacancy at your company. 02br
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00My Chinese
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0 Thanks a lot for your precious help!!! 0-

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