could you please give me an Idea about the structure of these sentences

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Today the parliament of Iran passed an emergency plan which according to it the capital of Iran will be changed. A large reasons for this plan is expressed which can be noted to air pollution, terrible traffic and the possibility of an earthquake in Tehran. Tehran already has a population of over 13 million people which In the event of an earthquake would bring heavy casualties due to the non-normative constructions. To select a new capital the required feasibility study should be performed.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

There are a few grammatical errors.

1. Today the parliament of Iran passed an emergency plan which according to it the capital of Iran will be changed.
A complex sentence: a main clause and at least one dependent clause.

2. A large reasons for this plan is expressed which can be noted to air pollution, terrible traffic and the possibility of an earthquake in Tehran.
A complex sentence with grammatical errors.

3. Tehran already has a population of over 13 million people which In the event of an earthquake would bring heavy casualties due to the non-normative constructions.
A complex sentence with grammatical errors.

4. To select a new capital the required feasibility study should be performed.
A simple sentence (by traditional grammatical analysis).

Sali Sadegh · Answer

thank you very much for your notes. May I ask please to write down your suggestion sentences with minimum changes?

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Today the parliament of Iran passed an emergency plan in which~~, according to it,~~ (redundant) the capital of Iran will be changed. A large number of reasons for this plan ~~is expressed which can be~~ have been noted: to air pollution (or poor air quality), terrible traffic and the possibility of an earthquake in Tehran. Tehran already has a population of over 13 million people. ~~which In the event of~~ An earthquake would bring heavy casualties due to the non-normative constructions. To select a new capital, ~~the required~~ a feasibility study should be performed.

Sali Sadegh · Answer

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could you please give me an Idea about the structure of these sentences

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