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Too many visitors to South Korea spend all their time in Seoul. In order to really understand my country's culture and four thousand year of history, you had better visit the city of Gyeongju.
Gyeongju which is located in the southern part of the country was the capitol of the ancient Kingdom of Silla for almost a thousand years. It was the center of the arts, science, and government in a very wealth country. In the Gyeongju national museum you would see the gold crowns of the Silla kings and queens and learn about the people's comfortable way of life.
In many ways, Gyeongju is likes an open-air museum. All around the city, there are ancient places and temples. The kings and queens of Silla are bury in huge tombs that look like hills covered with green grass. Just outside of the city is a mountain called Namsan. The forest there is filled with ancient statues and temples, and you can spend days just hiking in it. Tourists can also rent bicycles to ride through the countryside and visit more sites ancient. One of most beautiful is Seokguram, a statue of the Buddha built inside a stone cave.
Visitors who come to Gyeongju will see a different side of Korea. It's a modern country, but you will soon see why Gyeongju was called the "City of Gold" long ago.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: Too many visitors to South Korea spend all their time in Seoul. In order to really understand my country's culture and four thousand year of history, you had better visit the city of Gyeongju. Gyeongju which is located in the southern part of the country was the capitol of the ancient Kingdom of Silla for almost a thousand years.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: Too many visitors to South Korea spend all their time in Seoul.
  • In order to really understand my country's culture and four thousand year of history, you had better visit the city of Gyeongju.
  • Gyeongju which is located in the southern part of the country was the capitol of the ancient Kingdom of Silla for almost a thousand years.
  • It was the center of the arts, science, and government in a very wealth country.
  • In the Gyeongju national museum you would see the gold crowns of the Silla kings and queens and learn about the people's comfortable way of life.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

Too many visitors to South Korea spend all their time in Seoul. In order to really understand my country's culture and four thousand year of history, you had better visit the city of Gyeongju.

Gyeongju which is located in the southern part of the country was the capitol of the ancient Kingdom of Sil

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