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Dear All,I would like to apply a job how could I mention my education on it because I am studyingin master degree, the detail as belowPosition Sought  : Marketing ExecutiveEducation Background :March 2010 - Present  : Work toward Master of Science (Marketing)                                   Faculty of Business Administration, ABC UniversityMarch 2004 - April 2008 : Bachelor of Scinece in Economics                                      Faculty of Economics , XYZ UniversityYour all comments would appriciatedebangkok

V S Rao · Accepted Answer

Hi DB,
Here is the format:

CURRICULUM VITAE

Objective:
Summary:
Educational Background:
Master of Science : Presently doing Master of Science, Faculty of Business Administration from
ABC university - March, 2010 to present.
Bachechelor of Science: Specialisation in Economics, Faculty of Economics from XYZ University
March 2004 - April 2008.

Industry certifications :

Technical:

Professional Background:

Extracurricular Activities:

Address for correspondance:

Regards,
Sri

Anonymous · Answer

thank you so much for your comment

Dimsumexpress · Answer

Hi,

First, I think you need to pay more attention to your punctunations and choice of words.

I would like to apply [for] a job. how could I mention my education [?] ~~on it~~ because I am [still pursuing ] ~~studying~~

in my master degree in marketing . ~~the~~ Details [are] as belows :

Position Sought : Marketing Executive

Education Background :

March 2010 - Present : Work toward Master [a] of [in] Science (Marketing)

Faculty of Business Administration, ABC University

March 2004 - April 2008 : Bachelor of Scinece in Economics

Faculty of Economics , XYZ University

Could you please edit my resnme

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