Could you please edit my job cover letter

Here below is my job cover letter,

Dear Sir or Madam,


I am writing this letter to apply for Credit Analyst position in response to your advertisement in Jobabc.com.


I have completed my master's degree in Business Administration (MBA) from Bensalli University which I have gained knowledge in financial and marketing fields as well as economic analysis.


In addition, I was employed as a customer service representative in AB Bank. I was responsible for credit analysis in both consumer and commercial finance, credit proposals,worked in loan collections and maintained relationships with customers. During that time, I have gained knowledge of calculating consumer credit risk and proved myself as hard working and learnt how to work under pressure.


I believe that my experience, analytical skills and business sense, along with understanding of risk management are excellent matches for the qualifications you require for this position.


My resume is attached. An opportunity for a personal interview to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can be of value to your company would be most welcome. I appreciate your consideration and look forward to meeting you.


Yours faithfully,


Abpha Y.M.



I would be appreciated for your all comments,