Could you please edit my e-mial for suggestion

Write your commentDear all,

I have commented and suggested the international program in my university which usually use native language then she replied me that
my email was satire. please edit my email to reply her.

Dear Program Manager,

Thank you for your e-mail. Actually, I just would like to suggestion my opinion ,if you feel uncomfortable (regret, unlike, disappointment) please ignore my email.

Even though, you are a pioneer or fist mover in this sector but it doesn't mean you can be the last one or survivor in rapidly change environment

Please find the number2..4 (competitors )done but you (I want to sent the activity of another program done)

I would be appreciated for all comment

best regard

dbkk